Sunday, June 23, 2013

What You Need (Horror)

Here is a story I wrote some years ago.  It originally appeared on my horror blog.  Enjoy!

6 comments:

Andrew Leon said...

Wait! You posted it and it's not finished! bah!
But I like it. What a great idea. And it's hard to say he's not getting what he deserves even though he doesn't deserve that.

Briane P said...

I had no idea what your comment meant, and so I went and looked at the story and realized that the copy I posted had an old note at the end I hadn't realized was there.

The story actually IS done. That note came from when I posted the story the first time, in serial form -- I used to write them one section at a time -- and obviously the version I saved had it in there.

So in short: this IS the finished story, and you now know where the story was headed early on.

(It originally was NOT the story it is now.)

Andrew Leon said...

Okay, well...
The rest of what I said stands.

A Beer For The Shower said...

Ha! Yeah, like Andrew I too thought, wait, this isn't finished yet? Now it makes more sense. With that little note at the end, it COULD seem unfinished.

This is a very cool concept. I love that he's so nonchalant about it, like go with the flow. Well, this chick wants to hook up, so let's just keep hooking up until I get tired of her since she thinks I'm her ex. A real dick move, and yet still fun to read.

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